Proposal Feedback From Fiona

I received detailed feedback from one of my peers Fiona. She told me specifically on what I included well into my proposal . There were many successful key elements which I included which build up into my proposal. The positive feedback from Fiona showed my weaknesses and strengths in writing my proposal.

This voki can aid my final product as the as I am planning my magazine, I have to follow the proposal. With the help from peers I can understand more about how successful my magazine can be with views of my peers.